|Review:||Gabriella Hunter says:|
Hey there, lovely, its me with your requested review and I'm sorry that it took a minute longer than usual. I've been busy and typing and eating cake and you know how that is, right? Hahaha.
So I'm really glad that Mary is doing better but I am still pissed that her attacker hasn't been found yet and after Thalia's fight with Snape, I think I'm even madder. On the other end, it seems like Lily and James are getting along better in their own weird way and Maia and Remus? :3
Thalia's relationship with George is getting interesting too, I'm hoping that they get closer but Sirius is really not too happy about it. I mean, he was obviously bothered when they were making out and I expected him to say something about it. But he didn't and I'm wondering if he won't or will just bide his time...
With George though, I'm hoping that things go all right with Thalia and that her mother doesn't ruin everything. T-T
Christmas is going to be rather unpleasant for her! And Sirius as well, I really like to see the two of them bonding on that and I hope that they'll get closer as they work on this project together. :D
I really liked their Muggle studies teacher, he seems neat! Hahaha. I thought that there was alot of characters in this but I was able to follow it really well and I think all the details you added into it were great. There's still some tension between Thalia and Sirius and the threat of violence to come from Snape and Remus's snooping into what they were fighting about. I like the buildup too at the end, I'm thinking that dance with Sirius won't go as planned! ;)
So, as for CC's, there were just some sentences that could have been cut off but otherwise, it was great! :D
Author's Response: Hi Gabbie!
Don't worry about how long it takes, I know what life can be like, and that should always come first!
I had to make Mary, I mean I think it's too early for someone to die. And I really like her as a character as she makes me laugh, so I wouldn't want to kill her off!
The attacker should be revealed, in about 2/3 chapters, as the next 2 will be in the holidays so it obviously won't happen there!
Yes James and Lily are getting on slightly better, but it won't last for long with those two! And Maia and Remus will carrying on getting closer and closer ;D
I haven't really planned that much ahead with Thalia and George, but they will be together for a while. I thought it would be more realistic for James to say something about them making out, as I imagine Sirius as the more broody, quite type, and he'll bide his time, and think of a plan, rather than come out with it straight away!
Christmas will be interesting. That's all I'm really going to say about it. Lots of dramatic things will happen. As for the dance, I have a plan, and hopefully it will work out!
I'm glad that you thought that I managed the characters well, as now I think about it, there were an awful lot in this chapter! I guess I needed to make it up from last chapter, when it was just Sirius and Thalia really!
I'll look over the sentences, as I'm editing the whole story at the moment, so those should be sorted out soon :D
Thanks for the awesome review!