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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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I really enjoyed this chapter. Your characterization of Thalia is coming along super nicely, and I really enjoyed reading all of her interactions with friends and other people at Hogwarts in this chapter. I love the fact that she likes to get up early in the morning, go down to the common room and read. That is a very nice touch on her character.

I think my favourite part of this chapter was Thalia's conversation with Remus. I love the fact that Remus told Thalia about Sirius reading Muggle books just to annoy his family. That definitely seems very in character, and I found it quite funny that he had taken to reading books at school, too. I really like the fact that you are including little details like that, to make all of the characters seems so much more believable.

Oooh, George Wood. Related, by an chance, to Oliver Wood? He certainly seems just as Quidditch obsessed, and Quidditch obsessed characters are always a lot of fun!

Overall, I really enjoyed this chapter-I like how quickly Thalia is settling into her school life, and I'm interested to see where this will go next.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm glad that you really enjoyed this chapter, as that's always nice to hear! I'm glad that you like Thalia's characterisation, as she's my main character, so it would be bad, if you didn't like it! Yes I thought that would be a nice touch to add to her to, as it made her different to most other girls of her age.

I enjoyed writing that conversation between her and Remus as well, and I found it really cute, that I was tempted to make them go out, but quickly changed my mind!

I'm glad that you liked that Sirius read muggle books, as it did seem rather different for him to do that, but I see it paid off! I love the details about them, as I agree it does make the characters more believable!

Yes George Wood is Oliver Wood's Dad! I thought it would be fun to add that in, as he would have roughly been around with the Marauders! It was fun to include a quidditch obsessed character, as I agree they are fun!

I'm glad that you liked this chapter, and thanks for the great review!

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