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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey there, its Gabbie with your requested review! So, we got a POV change and I have to say that it was an interesting ride and I really enjoyed it! So, Tori was not nearly as perfect as she was made out to be and I'll be honest and say that I don't like her. There, I said it. I mean it. Hahaha. She just seems like a horrid, spoiled little brat, which makes it even more fun when you read through her POV! It must be strange for her though, having to always be on top, I feel like she might be really insecure underneath it all. While that's interesting, I found her treatment of herself and the others around her worrying and annoying. I mean, to be all honest, this is how I have my Victoire so I might be a little jealous of your characterisation of her. ;)
Her entire experience at Hogwarts started off with a gameplan that shows she's pretty slick and sly, making me wonder why the Slytherins aren't dealing with her. But then again, it takes some boldness to do what she does and I think that sets her apart and also keeps her on top. The slight manipulation that you have her doing is really realistic with girls like this but I do like that not everyone falls in line with her. Aine seems very disinterested in her and she's a little more outspoken than I would have thought and I really liked that.
So, onto the boys! OMG, Fred the Second! Give him to me for a present, would you? Thanks for not making him pale with red hair too, that was a welcome change and he seems delightful. James is the hunky player but there's some depth to him too I think that I'd love to see more of.
Tori sure did get what she wanted...because everyone else wanted it. I wonder how this will backfire on her later? That ending had me wondering how much she would do to keep James to herself and to stay on top. Curious, curious.
But anyway, this was great! I really did enjoy this and I didn't spot any major CC's or anything so great job!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for you awesome review-this one seriously made my day and I'm sorry I'm only just getting back to you now.

Tori is definitely a very different character in the respect that she is not likeable and all, and has very few redeeming qualities.

Aine is a fun character to write and YES! FRED THE SECOND! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE! I couldn't possibly write this story without including Fred, so I'm glad you liked him.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Courtney:)

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