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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Wow!

I've never seen a one-shot from Tom's point of view when he was a child before. This had a sort of haunting feel about it, because he just seems like an innocent, lost little boy in this, but of course we know what a monster he eventually morphs into.

At the same time though, he seems a little. . . .mental in this. Or not mental, but somethings a little off in this. He seems older than his years, like he's seen more than an eleven year old should. . . .and that scares me a little!

Really good job! Well done!

Author's Response: Hi!

I've never read a story from Tom's POV before either, so I really wanted to write this, as I do believe he wasn't always evil, and like you said I wanted to show that he could have been innocent at one point. Yes it is kind of weird knowing what he'll turn out to be, but I guess that's what makes his life so interesting, as he could have gone either way.

I'm glad that you picked up on the differences as that's what I was aiming to do! I always imagined that he would be very immature and mature for his age, if that makes sense? And I think given what he later turned out to be, he would be a little creepy!

Thanks for the great review!

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