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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :) I'm here with your requested review.

I thought this was a lovely chapter. I liked the Weasley girls going out dress shopping! I thought it was a really cool idea, even if they did have to try on loads of dresses! I've gone and checked out the dresses on your blog too and they're really cute! Rose and Dom are really lovely to read when they're together - they're such good friends as well as family.

Surely James can't be Carly's father? This sort of thing would have come out loads earlier? It will certainly be an interesting twist if he turns out to be!

A couple of typos for you:

'I made my downstairs' I think you need a 'way' in there.

'Oh my god, was James Carly's dad, surely not.' I'd maybe make this two sentences... 'Oh my god, was James Carly's dad? Surely not.'

'He couldn't be, could he.' You need a question mark here.

I'd also just re-read the diary entry at the start. There were a few sentences that didn't quite make sense!

Great chapter once again!
Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hello again :)

As for the James/Nikola/Carly thing all is revealed in chapter 9 :D

I'll make sure I go and edit them.

Thank you for the rewiew's xx and Glad you like it.

-Potterfan310
Soph x


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