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Review:potterfan310 says:
I really like this so far and your characterisation of Allie is great especially since she's a tree. Lol :D

Allie reminds me of myself in ways, "Talking= social interaction" I am so socially awkward it is unreal and when talking to teachers I get nervous and find it awkward. I mean I tend to stand/sit there and nod at what they're telling me.

"Two hours panicking for NOTHING!" - That sounds like something I would do, worry myself senseless and then realise oh yeah I can do magic.

I really like your description of her cat Albert, He seems awesome. I love that you'll find him in the washing machine. (I'm guessing she's either muggle born or half blood due to the fact she has a washing machine and ipod??)

James/OC I love it!!! I can't wait to see more interaction between them. Was it love at first sight for Allie as James helped her with her trunk??

Good start and I really like it :D

There were a few little errors that can be easily fixed but overal it was awesome!

-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate what everyone has to say and yes I have realised since posting the chapter that there are a few typos and the like which will eventually be sorted out but I am currently quite busy re-writing my other story. I will try and get round to sorting it out as soon as I can but I can't really guarantee anything, thank you again!
Beth x

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