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Review:Faith100z says:

I was so happy when I saw you had posted a new chapter! I'm really hooked on this story already.

I love the authenticity you put into your writing. It makes the story just that much better. All the details and description are wonderful. You end each chapter at such a good moment, it always leaves me dying to know what happens next.

The flashback was really well written, great job! It was really interesting to get some history and background on Camille and Xavier. I'm anxious to see how things evolve between them!

We also got a lot of insight on Jean's character this chapter. I love the way you've revealed some of his more questionable traits. I really got the sense that there's something a little bit off about him, in addition to being cruel and cold.

I also loved how you're keeping Simon present in each chapter. I'm excited to see what happens with him and his family. I'm really hoping they get out safe and sound.

The whole chapter was just amazingly well written, you're very talented! I'm looking forward to find out what happens next! :)

- Faith

Author's Response: Hello again!

Camille and Xavier will evolve, I'll say that much -- though it can be for better or for worse!

Jean is such a fun character to write, albeit spine-chilling and evil. You will also find out more about him in the coming chapters!

In the upcoming chapters, we get a flashback for Simon and his family, so I hope you'll like that. Them trying to find a way out is going to be a huge part of the story, as you can imagine, but I won't spill the beans...

Thank you so much for the review dear! :)

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