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Review:Dark Whisper says:
I love your description of Krum's reaction the night before. He offered no defense, just agreed with her assessment. Loved it!

Weddings... I just love them. I love Harry having a conversation with Viktor. He didn't seem judgemental. And of course, Viktor wouldn't dislike Harry and has respect for him. Glad it happened and he wasn't shunned or ignored.

Her parents' reactions were right on. Hermione and Krum... awkward.

And oh, that dance. Weddings tend to bring up the possibilities of the future... a touchy subject when the two might find themselves on opposing ideas of what that future might look like. It's precisely where age, marriage, and children could be the end of them. Dangerous territory if you ask me and perfectly realistic as it was bound to happen eventually.

And now we are at yet another heart-breaking end to one of your brilliant chapters.

She is drunk, but he refuses her advances. His blunt confession about all those women is a bit harsh, but I was more than happy with his wonderful reason... he wants all of her. With experience comes wisdom and he is so right in this matter. It is chivalrous of him. Even though she might not understand it, he is awesome to turn her down on this night. I love your Krum! Outstanding characterization. I know I'm repeating myself, but it cannot be helped.

Amazing,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Weddings! I know it's not exactly the most original setting, but I couldn't resist. I really thought Rose needed at least one person there who didn't think she was crazy, and Harry seemed a good fit. After all he's been through, I'd like to think it wouldn't really occur to him to be bothered by it all.

I thought the same thing... weddings do tend to drag up unaddressed relationship issues. Even if they don't solve their issues in one go, I think they've been through enough at this point to be able to talk about these sorts of things.

I'm so glad you liked the ending. After what they'd just discussed, it felt important to establish that Krum does love Rose, even if he doesn't want to marry her, and also that Rose was really back in the relationship 100%. I couldn't imagine him just blurting out "I Love You," but his heart is in the right place, even if he's words are hurtful.

Thank you for the review!



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