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Review:missclaire17 says:
So there is something so personal going on with Carlotta that she's avoiding James.
It would be completely like Harry to remove the file and take out that one page and not tell anyone.

I'm torn about whether the Obliviators having a file on everyone who can be a threat to the Statute is ethical or not... while it makes sense, it also doesn't seem right to have all of this personal information, ya know?

I LOVE seeing Al, James, and Harry interact with ecah other. Or more like James and Al talking and James and Harry talking.
The fact that James will now try even harder to find a flying instructor for Hogwarts because Harry doesn't like Ginny to be away from home is so sweet! It's also kinda cute that Harry still doesnt like to be parted from Ginny in a prolonged period of time. It's really cute, the way that they're like that.

I hope that Carlotta will let James know what is going on, and they can fix it so they can get together.

Author's Response: There is indeed something personal going on with Carlotta. It's big. And it's revealed very soon. :)

The Obliviators' files are totally not ethical! Perhaps knowing the identity of any potential threat is reasonable, and where they live - but they really don't need to know most of what they accumulate. But it's so easy for them to collect this kind of information (the Ministry always seems to know these things!) that they wouldn't consider it to be an invasion of privacy. It definitely leaves an unpleasant taste in the mouth though.

I'm enjoying the conversations that James is able to have with Harry and Albus now they're not clouded with ill-feeling. The chats in this chapter in particular were very fun - and easy - to write. And I love Harry/Ginny as well, haha. Thanks for reviewing!


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