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Review:patronus_charm says:
I saw you status on the forums and Iím so glad that I stopped by this was just so powerful. Wow, is all I can really say about this.

I really liked the analogy with Humpty Dumpty as it does show you how easily something can be broken beyond repair, and as much as you try and fix it there really isnít anything you can do about it.

Alice and Frankís love for one another just seemed so pure and true, and you could tell how deeply they cared for one another. It brought tears to my eyes, over how they were both trying to save one another, yet refusing to be saved as they knew it would sacrifice the other one.

Then the scene when Alice is holding Neville, and knowing that she has a connection with this baby, but doesnít know why or how. Itís just heart-breaking really, and it shows you how much Neville had to suffer, and why he had so many insecurity issues.

The ending was probably the most powerful part of the story, and it showed you how pointless all the fighting and war was. The way you left it on why, just asked the question everyone wanted to ask themselves. Why? Why all of this suffering, and killing, and for what end result? It was just such a powerful ending, and all thanks to a single word.

I thought this was a superb one-shot, and Iím so glad that I clicked on the link, as it was just so moving, and it made you really attached to Alice and Frank, and it makes you look at their story in a different light. A definite 10/10, Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hey Kiana, thanks so much for the review! Nursery rhymes are really quite haunting when you look at the lines :P I'm glad that you're glad you clicked on the link ;)

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