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Review:EJK says:
I really enjoyed this chapter. Itís nice to be back in Hogwarts :)

The Quidditch tryouts are a nice touch to the story- especially having Ginny as captain and using some Ďfamiliar facesí on the team. The pace of this chapter also keeps a nice balance for the characters. The trial with Lucius reminded the reader of the Battle of Hogwarts and the events of the HP series. It would have been nice to see Harry and Ron at Hogwarts with Hermione and Ginny but I do understand why you have chosen to have them enter the Auror program straight away.

As I have previously said, the changes in points of view are fantastically written and well placed. The dynamic between the Hogwarts moments and the outside world keeps the reader intrigued and looking forward to joining each set of characters again.

As ever, Iím looking forward to reading on!

NOTE FOR THE AUTHOR: Do you have an editor? A fresh pair of eyes go a long way when developing a storyÖ even a family member or a close friend. A grammar checking programme is also worth looking into. You can find these online or through your word processor.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!

I think Ginny was the obvious choice for Quidditch captain ;) I'm glad you thought so too. I think the fact that I had Lucius go back to Azkaban clashes with JKR's version - I think she said their entire family was released. But not in my story - mostly for the sake of Draco and his mother.

I'm really glad that these different point of views work for you, and that you're enjoying this story. It makes me very happy :) thank you so much.


I actually don't have an editor, as it would require for someone to spend quite a lot of time on this story... I do however write this story in Word, but I guess it doesn't catch every mistake.


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