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Review:nott theodore says:
I really enjoyed this chapter! I knew there was something that Carla is hiding and this chapter has just made me even more curious about what it is - I hope we find out soon! Even though I do really want to know, I'm glad Harry took the page from the file because I'm sure that Carla needs to tell James whatever it is herself. I'm also glad that Harry knows already because there's someone there for James when he does find out, if he needs it (I have a few ideas about what it is and if some of them are right, James will need support!)
I also really liked the fact that James is becoming closer to Al and Harry in this chapter, and realising that he needs his family. Even if it was Al's suggestion, it was good to see him asking Harry for advice instead of Ginny.
I'm glad that Brigid didn't do something stupid like forgiving Fred straight away and falling into his arms, because he doesn't really deserve it. If he changes and she can forgive him, it would be nice to see them try going out, though. I feel sorry for James there, stuck between his two best friends!
But it was another brilliant chapter and well done!

Author's Response: Carlotta's secret will be revealed very very soon! I hope it meets up to expectations. :) I'm intrigued as to what your ideas are! You'll have to let me know if you were right...

I'm thoroughly enjoying writing James' conversations with Harry and Albus now that they're all okay with each other! Harry is certainly going to become an important figure for James, because regardless of how old he is, he still needs his dad to help him out sometimes.

Brigid won't be dishing out forgiveness to Freddie any time soon! He's been a complete idiot, regardless of whether his reasons are valid. Unfortunately it does indeed put James in a little pickle! Thanks for reviewing :)


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