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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Heartbreaking... just heartbreaking.
Darn those drugs. But he was clean for so long. I appreciated Brooks' take on the situation. He has been through this before. Sometimes, it just happens.

And Hugo as well... not really placing blame, but just accepting that people slip up. Addiction is an extremely powerful thing.

But things seemed to be going so well. Something seems amiss. And since I don't trust too many in the story, I'm wondering if Heart sabotaged him somehow to get Krum in the limelight again... bad publicity is still publicity and he is going for the best seller. Hmm.

And Hugo's claim of miscalculating the dose seems out of place as well. A normal sober person would be extremely careful. And he had his wand laying out. So, hmm.

Either way, poor Krum and poor Rose for having to witness him in that horrible state. Awful.

Again, you describe this scene very well, even being realistic at the sickness involved with drugs. Not pretty, indeed.

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: It's not the most uplifting chapter, is it? I am glad it felt realistic though. I tried not to gloss over too much while still keeping it site-appropriate.

And I'm glad you could appreciate what Peter said here. I really wanted to cross the line in having him become an ally for Rose, someone outside her family that was on her side. Even though they got off to a rough start, I do think Peter's heart is in the right place.

Yay for suspicions! I definitely wanted this point in the story to be questionable -- did Krum do it to himself or was it done to him, and if so, by who? I didn't want people to be able to guess the ending, but I did want some level of doubt to start creeping in.

Thanks so much for the review!


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