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Review:teh tarik says:

no you can't just end like that no no no arrgh arrgh. no my head is spinning yes honestly gnglnalskhkjlhasdjkfasad


Er...trying to think of something to say here. First, LOVED that conversation between Edie and Lisa. This went in a very unexpected direction and I'm so glad it did. Their friendship in the past had always seemed a little flat mostly because Lisa did not seem human. Baha. I mean...well you know what I mean. Great perfect life...getting married...good job...great perfect life - and that's pretty much all Edie ever sees about Lisa, at least now in the present - not sure how these two were like when they were younger. But lovely work here. LOVED how Edie packed enough supplies for a full day excursion which turned out to be a ten minute thing.

Edie dated Cormac!?!?! You mean McLaggen? Baha...I loved how you described their relationship: We were both bored from day one, but we were bored with everything else in our lives too, so we stuck it out.

Sounds like quite a typical modern day relationship :D I really appreciate it when you bring in these sorts of anecdotes of Edie's fact I love it when any new information on Edie is revealed :)

And the Gala. I'd quite forgotten about it. It was quite a few chapters ago. Gah! By the time Mildred allocated to Edie I was hardly surprised. I knew it was going to suck. Just didn't know how bad. And then drama. And then Rose. And then what. Edie is going to tell Blakeslee.

OK I have no idea what's going to happen but I bet it's something bad. Things do not flow smoothly for Edie never ever. Bah, OK.

One last thing...just MORE. And SOON.


Author's Response: You!!!


I'm glad to see that I have (I think?) converted one reader into liking Lisa. I know she sounds perfect, but I based her off of my friend who is in the same life situation and is equally nice and beautiful... it's nauseating, haha ;D I also wanted to show her as a modest and un-frivolous person, like she has it all but she doesn't let it get to her head--that's why she took all of 10 minutes to find a wedding dress!

Yes! Cormac McLaggen! haha. I had an original character at first, but you know how much I love throwing in minor characters... Rose, Theo, Lisa, Dean, Seamus, Cho (kind of)... now Cormac! xD

hahaha I love that everyone's response so far has been "something bad is going to happen to Edie because NOTHING GOOD HAPPENS TO HER." I won't say either way ;3 but the next chapter is being validated right now.

Thank you so, so, so much! I'm always so excited to see reviews from you!

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