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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

It's Valentine's Day so I thought I'd spare a little time today to come and give this story some more love ♥ :D I feel like I was mostly expecting the awkwardness that was going to come in this chapter, but it's always so interesting reading it! It feels so strange to relate to Hermione/Ron when they're so much older than how i know them to be.. but I thought Ron's characterisation was particularly great - the man's ability to deny reality was astounding, but also Hermione's understanding nature towards Rose.

The only thing I was a bit iffy about was this part: Hugo was right. Facing her parents was nearly as bad as she'd expected, at least not at first. You kind of completely skipped over the part of Rose actually seeing her parents for the first time after the incident and a part of me really wanted to see exactly how awkward it would be! :P I guess I just found the transition from Rose/Hugo's conversation to in the middle of Rose's conversation with her parents a little abrupt.

And of course, you once again leave me with a big WHY? stuck in my head. Regina McFey hmmm.. :) Great chapter!!

Author's Response: What a wonderful Valentine's Day surprise!

I know this chapter wasn't full of surprises, but hopefully it wasn't too disappointing or anticlimactic. I'm glad you liked Ron's characterizations. I wanted to try and make him feel as canon as possible but also knowing that he'd mature and mellow a bit with age.

Hmmm... I can totally see what you're saying about that transition. In my head, I mostly just saw Hermione fussing over Rose until the moment where they all sit down in the living room, but you're right. Looking back, it does feel like I might have skipped over something important there.

Thank you so much for stopping by with another review. I hope you had a lovely Valentine's Day!


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