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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Hello from review tag!

So, I liked this chapter more than the last, and I don't really know why. Perhaps because some exciting stuff happened? Perhaps because I'm a sucker for romance? Perhaps... no, never mind, I don't know why; I just did.

I like how we're learning more about the Marauders' personalities. Obviously, Remus is the most well defined so far, because it's from his point of view. I'm liking how he's turning out, although I can feel he's a bit morbid on his outlook on life, at times. Sirius, I think, is also pretty well defined. He's quite proud and arrogant, but I think also that there are elements to his personality that he's hiding under a facade.

Personally, I think June is a much better fit for Remus than Ruby. I don't think I actually like Ruby that much for some reason, but maybe I'll change my mind when I get to know her a bit better. Dara is also pretty adorable, and I can't wait for her date with Sirius, because I think she'd throw him right off!

Anyways, I see there isn't a next chapter, but I look forward to reading it when you post next!

Author's Response: Hello again! I'm so happy to see you back for chapter two.

Haha, I think I enjoyed writing this chapter more than the first, too. It was surprisingly easy and I think I managed it within the space of a few hours, which is totally unlike me. I usually spend days fretting over my chapters.

I'm really glad you like my characters-they're all a lot of fun to write, and I honestly couldn't say who my favourites actually are!

I shall update soon, I promise!

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