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Review:yureka says:
I think the story is good so far. It has a lot of potential. But there are things that you should be careful.
Wizards are super overpowered beings and the story needs some sort of balance. I think that one wizard alone could bring to its knees a single country just by aparating and destroying railways, electric things, burning forests, etc. This couldnt be stopped unless you ban aparition in the hole country.
For the setting to be reliable all sides in the war need to be protected by their own wizard force in a way that makes sense. As the axis has control over there, their wizards should have advantage.

A thing I considered weird is the methods to kill. wizards kind of want to stay secret, using avadakevra or potion destroy inside body are not good ways.
If i where a wizard i would just do it in a more normal way where the other side wouldnt know a wizard resistance is doing its work. imperio him to fall in the bathroom, killed by his dog, suicide, or just killed by a gun:P

Author's Response: There is some kind of balance, it just hasn't been mentioned yet. However, I don't think a single wizard could bring the entire country to its knees -- even Voldemort had supporters with him, and together they didn't destroy the United Kingdom.

There is no way Apparition would have been banned in the whol country -- it's absolutely vital for the wizarding resistance to be able to flee rapidly from the places where they act.

Wizards would want to stay hidden, I agree, but that doesn't mean that they will use "normal ways" to kill their targets. These are traceable, more obvious, and it is much easier to miss than by using magic.

Thank you for your suggestions, and thanks for the review.

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