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Review:adluvshp says:
Hi there! Well, I was just browsing through your author's page and this story immediately caught my eye! I have recently grown to love such Founders stories and was intrigued by the summary, so I came to read it, and I don't regret it at all!

This was such a well-written piece and I loved it! I think you have characterised Helena perfectly, and the whole scenario surrounding her and her mother was amazing. I loved the way you showed the events leading up to Helena's run in such a plausible way.

Baron's description was nicely done too, though brief, it showed why Helena would not marry him. I loved the little detail of a Trelawney predicting that the Baron would murder someone, and the irony of him ultimately murdering Helena (as we know).

The dialogue between Helena and Rowena was also written very well, and I loved the way you characterised Rowena - it showed the Ravenclaw spirit in her.

All in all, this was a beautifully written piece and I enjoyed every word of it. You have a great writing talent.



P.S. I also want to apologize if I hurt your feelings in my previous (requested) review on your other story when I said that I hope you respond to my review as I'd seen that you hadn't responded to the others. I never intended to be rude, and I am sorry if I was. Once again, I'd like to say, you're a really good writer - much better than I am - and I am glad you requested for reviews from me, and also that I stumbled across this wonderful story. Thanks. All my love! Happy valentines!

Author's Response: You again, hooray!

This fic was one that was completely out of my comfort zone when I first got the idea for it -- I'm very happy you enjoyed it!

The Baron, ugh. He's such a vile creature in my head for some reason, when there are some stories where I adore him -- academica's Diamonds into Coal, for instance. The irony with Trelawney was one I couldn't resist, you're actually one of the few people to have picked up on that!

Thank you so much for this review :)

By the way, you honestly don't need to apologise. You weren't rude at all, I just wanted to make sure you knew I'd get back to your reviews eventually! And you're a great writer too, you know -- I loved Moments of Perfection.

Happy Valentine's to you too!

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