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Review:EJK says:
Ok, so again, a very plausable plot line that HP fans can relate to. An improvement can be noticed where the writing style, spelling and grammar are concerned.

If I have to be critical about this chapter, I was not thoroughly impressed by the first segment of the speech at the funeral. It seemed cheesy at times and predictable, but the remainder did make up for that.

I love the relationship dynamic between all of these new couples and the fact that Hermione has gone in search of her family.

The mention of Hedwig was nice, also.

Otherwise, very well thought out. There was a clear progression to the 'cliffhanger'. The author has also successfully opened up avenues for characters that can be explored within the next few chapters. Good work!! Keep improving and entertaining us! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me happy!

I had a hard time writing the funeral, actually, but I'm glad you pointed it out. If I find the inspiration one day I'll definitely give it a second try :)

I'm really glad that you liked the chapter. Thank you so much for your review - it's really great to hear what you like and don't like about the story! I'm very grateful :)


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