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Review:EJK says:
Overall, this is a refreshing and believable addition to the 'Harry Potter' series. I believe this author has found an area for topic which will intrigue most readers and fans of the HP world. While there are several spelling, grammatical and language errors, the story still follows the original style and grips the reader from the start.

The changes between the character's points of view is a wonderful touch as the reader gets to fully appreciate the events of the story in a '360' like experience. I especially liked the smaller touches with the characterisation, such as Teddy's blue hair and Harry looking to Prof. MG after stating that Lupin was the best teacher he had ever had!

Considering English is not the first language of the writer, I believe they should feel all the more proud for producing such a high standard of work! I look forward to reading the remainder of their work!!

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for reading my story and for leaving so many reviews! I really appreciate it :)

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I will have to look over this chapter again and try to correct the mistakes I've made, if I can find them :) Thanks for telling me, because you're helping me in improving my writing!

I thought that since the books are all written from Harry's point of view, it would be more interesting to do it this way. I'm glad you liked it. Also, it makes me really happy when people notice details like that - I figured Harry's worried he'll upset McGonnagall in that specific moment by calling someone else his favorite teacher ;)

Thank you so much for your compliments as well as your critique!

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