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Review:hpsauce says:
I like how you've gone for looking at Snape's afterlife and how he almost had to clear things up with Harry before he went into the afterlife. I loved your description of the mist in the beginning and how the piece progressed slowly and didn't reveal everything at once.
Just a few grammatical errors:
Where you've written 'might of' in the second paragraph, it should be 'might have'.
Also, you have misspelled traveller as 'traveler' and the same with travelled.
Aside from them minor grammar issues, it was a great piece that really showed an insight into the character.
The results should be posted for my challenge soon as I only have a few more pieces to read and review. Thanks for entering :D
Sophie x

Author's Response: Thanks for the input... I do tend to neglect grammar and spelling quite often.

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