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Review:AlexFan says:
I was so excited for some banter between Sirius and Thalia but sadly, there wasn't all that much and it ended much too soon.

When I got to the part about Thalia going to talk to George and Lily making a comment about her 'having fun' I was going "I KNEW IT! I KNEW THIS WAS GONNA HAPPEN!"

Sorry, I just expected her to get with George, no idea why, it was just this feeling that I got.

Also, you've got some grammatical errors in this chapter that I think you might want to fix. Feel free to ignore me though.

And the whole part where Thalia and Sirius were baring their souls to each other. I'm sorry, I just couldn't help but gag at that. I was like "oh my God, could you make this any chessier." It's not that the scene was written badly, it's just that I'm not a person for cheesy romance moments.

Hell, even when I have to write them I cringe sometimes because I hate to do it.

I couldn't help but clap my hands in glee after reading your Author's Note and finding out that Fleur's mother had rejected James. That would've been totally awesome if it had actually happened and really funny!

Anyway, great chapter and if you read and review the next two chapter of It Happened Accidentally then I should warn you that I edited chapters 10, 11, 12 and 14 so they're in the cue and haven't been validated yet.

Author's Response: Hello again!

Yes I liked the banter, but I felt that it had to end soon, as they don't know each other that well, so it would have been a bit unlikely if they kissed or whatever.

With her and George, you'll find out in the next chapter what happens, so I won't say now ;)

Yeah I know I have some grammar issues, but a have a school holiday next week, so I'll have lots of time then to properly check through, and weed out the errors.

Ah yes James and Fleur's mother I thought that would be fun to add it in!

Thanks for the review, and I'll be off to them soon!

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