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Review:Dark Whisper says:
The excerpt in this chapter just breaks my heart. Drugs. :( And people around him riding the wave until the money ran out. So sad, my poor Krum. Boo hoo. :( Such a sad existence and circumstance and not to mention entirely believable.

Oh and now we know this little twist with Brooks. It was very surprising that he would be Krum's step-son. Hmm. Intriguing.

And oh my, there he is... Viktor Krum in the flesh, whispering his husky voice into her ear, oh my twinkling stars! And he knew. Ah, a man of mystery. I do love what he says and how he says it. You've written him so well already. :)

Excellent pull to the next chapter. MUST KEEP READING!

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: I really wanted to make his past troubles as believable as possible -- having him both a victim of his circumstance but also very much to blame for his own troubles. I'm really happy it felt plausible to you.

Hehehe, I couldn't help myself. I figured Krum deserved a good entrance. And since he's going to prove a big mystery to Rose, it only seemed fitting.

I'm so glad the story is holding your attention and pulling you along. That's just about the best compliment there is!


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