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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Well, based on the excerpt, I don't like his second wife too much. She seemed to have spent an awful lot of his money. Yikes.

Heart is definitely right about this opportunity. It is HUGE and others would be knocking down his door. I like it that he said her writing had heart. He seems to be a master of knowing what will sell, even knowing that the story needs 'heart' to be a best seller. Even I want a copy... preferable signed by Krum, of course. :P

And Mr. Brooks, now here is a more typical lawyer. He sure seems confident, condescending, with a lot of blanks for her to fill in. I have to admit, I too am interested in Krum's "situation," but I'm just another Quidditch fangirl. Rose has no idea... yet.

Great story, G-Wiz. It flows really well and you leave us wanting more.
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you picked up on the bit about the second wife, since she has a big part to play down the road.

I do sort of see Heart as a master businessman. He isn't exactly lovable, but he does know what he's doing, and Rose can respect him for that. And hooray for more Quidditch fangirls!!

Thanks for another lovely review. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!


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