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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for your requested review again!

Haha, I quite enjoyed this chapter too! Ah, poor Peony and her sad romantic life. I do feel so sad for her. And oh the precious sugar quills!

"Hed promised that he would save his sugar quills for her, just her, and only her, and hed given away an entire box to everyone else." This had me cracking, haha.

Oh, and of course, Lambie. After the demise of her little house-elf companion, she got herself a new one! How very fitting xP

Well, I don't know much else to say. I think you have the whole thing going on really well. The way the plot is playing out is quite funny, and yet coherent enough (for a Mary-Sue parody at least). Peony's character is downright hilarious, and I enjoyed the way you incorporated the poor guy who broke her heart (all she did was hold hands and eat sugar quills with him after all, cant blame him, but then she's so perfect and she wanted him to be chivalrous! Oh how to decide between the right and wrong)! *giggles* Back to the story, I quite liked the chapter and the "action" in it. The ending was intriguing, and I love the situation you have Peony in.

All in all, you're doing a pretty good job of writing this so keep going.

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hellooo!

I think Lambie was my favorite to write. She almost got her own character arc, but I held myself back. I'm so glad you are finding the plot funny AND coherent. That is clearly my greatest worry.

The "action" was also really fun to write. I think I had some pent up angst-filled china issues to work out. This did the trick.

Thanks so much for your review!


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