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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Helena's childlikeness (that's not a word, is it?) attitude is so wonderful to read, even when we know what's coming. Their was a striking contrast between her and Venn in this chapter, something that suggests darker days ahead?

The description of village life in this chapter was beautiful, and amazingly well-done.

Okay. I know this wasn't the point of the passage, but that glove/gage handing at th end made me laugh, because I've been studying Shakespeare and there's a scene of 'you drop my glove so I drop mine so I drop my other one'. So yes. Slightly pointless comment, but voila.

I think this is one of my favourite chapters so far, particularly because of the opposing views on Muggle-borns and what is due to people of inferior rank.

Author's Response: Yes, the contrast is definitely there!

I'm glad you liked the description and the historical details. The argument about whether Muggles should or should not be trusted and included will become a big theme in this story.

Thanks again for all of your wonderful reviews! Hope to see you again soon to continue with this story. I'm planning to post the next chapter tomorrow for V-Day :)


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