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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think your attempt at writing something really dark really, really turned out well!

The kind of pain you've given Draco, how easy it is to feel his torture, is so well done. I think that Draco's life could have gone a very different way if he'd been able to try and seek help. He learned early on in the war that he had just as much of a chance of dying as any muggle born, and if that would have been enough to motivate him to finding help... well anyway, the fact that you had it doing just that in this was such an awesome choice.

The way she was sort of his reason, but that he trusted her enough to allow her to take him into this world where he didn't trust *anyone* shows us how deeply he really did care for her.

Then when you brought about the ending, and we watch Draco make the choice not to suffer without her anymore, I felt so sad but relieved for him at the same time.

More than that, I felt like it was a really 'in character' move. Which is impressive to find in an AU!

This was an awesome read! I think you did a great job surrounding it with the challenge, because you absolutely demonstrate the devastation and importance of the 'single spell'!

♥ Jami

Author's Response: Hi dear! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I do love your reviews, always.

I am glad that you think this turned out well, thanks. I do agree with you, I always thought that Draco's life would have been very different if he had had help. So, I used it in this AU story!

I wanted to get the point across that Draco and Catherine cared a lot for each other so I am pleased that it came through to you through my flashback.

It was a sad choice, yes, but I think Draco needed that in a way.

Really, it was in-character? Thank you, that means a lot to me!

Thank you so much once again for your lovely review, I am glad you liked it =)


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