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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello! I'm here with your requested review!

This was hauntingly beautiful. You presented the relationship between Draco and the OC in very little detail, but what was presented was enough to make me understand that she was very important to him and that his loss hit him the hardest, out of all the casualties of war.

This was a very interesting journey through the mind of a very sad and depressed young man and I think you described it perfectly. The way in which he saw her fall after taking the curse for him and the image of him shaking her lifeless body really made an impression on me.

I liked how the words "come with me" were repeated throughout the story and only in the end did we really understand their true meaning, that Catherine was calling for Draco to come home to her. In a way it reminded me of "Wuthering Heights", where a character by the same name called her lover home for many years, until he gave in and followed her.

The closing line was perfect, the realization that he has come full circle and it is time for him to be with her is something that makes a real impression and it painted such a painful yet beautiful image of love that it brought me to tears.

The writting style was impeccable, very suited for the mood and general atmosphere of the story, the grammar and spelling were perfect, I can only stand back and be amazed by this sad romance. Congratulations to you!

Ral

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Hauntingly beautiful really? Thank you! I am glad that you could understand the relationship between Draco and Catherine despite it being presented in short detail, as that was my aim.

I am pleased that her taking the curse and image of him shaking her body made an impression on you, as I worked hard on that scene.

Yes indeed, I have always found the idea of a dead person "calling" out to their lover, so I experimented with that idea in this story, so I am glad you liked it. Ooh, I love Wuthering Heights, though it has been forever since I read it and I didn't quite think of it while writing this (and I just love the name Catherine), but I guess my subconscious mind perhaps took the idea from there, somewhat ;)

I planned out the ending first before writing the story, so I am glad you found it done well, and that made an impression, and moved you.

Its great that you liked my writing style and the general atmosphere. Its a relief to know that there were no grammar/spelling errors.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments!


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