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Review:ValWitch21 says:
That first line is one of the most gripping I have ever read. You put so much about Venn in one line, the fact that maybe, unconsciously, he isn't as self-assured as he'd like, that he has someone's shoes to step into, that despite everything he says and does he's still fragile. I suddenly like him a bit more.

Their first encounter, wow. You pulled it off brilliantly, completely in tune with the medieval atmosphere. And, very important, you reminded me that Venn was in fact a human being and not just some kind of manipulative idiot, so thank you, because I'd kind of forgotten about that.

Author's Response: I really like the first bit about the jacket. I meant for it to symbolize exactly what you said--Venn is a young man stepping into shoes too big for him, not really ready for that burden. I'm glad that made him more likable for you.

Yeah, part of my devious scheming for this story was to get people to like and dislike both Venn and Helena at certain times. I want to take an old story and complicate it a little, so you don't know who to root for, if anyone. Maybe you'll wind up rooting for them both...

Thanks again :)


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