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Review:ValWitch21 says:
This may sound ridiculous, but I just transposed Helena into present times and imagined her complaining about some football-centered bloke.

Anachronies aside, I've got to tell you yet again how wonderful I find your imagery and description of characters. Helena's introduction at the beginning of the chapter was brilliantly done, and, again, I could see her, almost like a movie (and a good one at that!)

Then there's your author note at the end, that almost amazes me as much as your writing. You include so many little things that could just come from the back of your head (which, don't get me wrong, would be pretty good too) but are entirely cannon or with historical meaning. HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE. You've obviously put quite a lot of thought and research and time into writing this, and the impulsive, 'oh hey let's not proofread and see what happens' person I am can't do anything except congratulate you.

Author's Response: Haha, that's funny, and quite accurate :)

It's good that you still like the imagery and the historical detail. I don't want it to be cumbersome, just to add a little something extra to the overall plot. I have put a lot of thought into this story, and I'm pleased that you can see and appreciate that, so thanks!

-Amanda


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