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Review:ValWitch21 says:
So many little details that flow so smoothly -- I could really, really visualise the scene, without feeling like you were sticking the description in my face.

The reviews I leave may seem a bit strange and out of the blue, but I'll say things as if I was reading this for the first time -- which is almost the case, because I've forgotten since last time.

Anyway. Venn seems like a fascinating character, though extremely cold and calculating (proof comes afterwards, so I won't act like a Seer or anything).

It's interesting to see that you've made a link between him and Salazar, wasn't there something in DH about the locket potentially being Salazar's? In any case the connection is interesting, and something I hadn't paid attention to before...

Author's Response: Oh, that's great! I felt like I was trying a little too hard with the imagery in the first part of this story, so it's lovely to hear that it was smooth for you and helped you to picture the scene.

I'm happy you like Venn, too, or at least find him interesting. There was something in Deathly Hallows about the locket being his, and I think the other potential family was the Selwyns--Venn's family! Salazar's relationship with Venn will continue to be important.

Thanks Val!

-Amanda


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