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Review:FallenAmaranth says:
Darling! An update! I have to say, I really do adore your stories, however this is quite possibly my ultimate fave! Closely rivalled by 'Daddy's Girl' of course ;)

I've just read this for the second time, the first was at 1:39AM this morning(exact, I know) but my screen was turned toward my bed and I couldn't review it there and then because I'm far too lazy to get up and fetch my keyboard. :D

Can I just say, the whole 'Aimee-blindfolded-and-James's-breath-on-her-neck' scene I ABSOLUTELY LOVED, I mean, come on they're starting to be nice to each other and he found her a job and she kissed him!! I know you know all this because you wrote it, but this chapter made me SO happy. Not just because I've been wanting to read BANG for so long, but because there were so many sweet moments between Aims and James(HA! Rhymes!) and also I WANT HER FREAKING APARTMENT!

The new one, obviously, not the one with mice. (Speaking of, I swear there's one in my house somewhere and all the cat does is sleep!)

I might have mentioned this once or twice in a previous review, but in case you'd forgotten, I really dislike Dan. With a passion. What is he playing at, not using correct grammar when he's texting? Honestly, he's worse than my mother! ;)

Nah, but really, I hope Aimee neglects to mention where she's moving to, until he ends up running out of post it notes. I really liked his mum though... :)

Why does he continue to pester her anyway? She's obviously in another relationship(not a proper one but he doesn't know that, and they're gonna get married anyway so what does it matter. By the way I don't care if they do or don't in your story, BUT THEY WILL ANYWAY, when you're not watching)

I feel like this review has not been helpful to your writing in the slightest, although now you know what one corner of the inside of my head feels like...

Although, I do think it'd be a bit better if the WANTED ad was in italics, but that's it :D :D :D

Ugh, I loved this, and you're SO speedy with updates that I almost want to marry you.

Almost ;)

EMILY :P

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