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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there! Thanks for re-requesting!

I have to admit, I didn't actually realize Oliver was so...old! As silly as it seems, I find it odd to think of the Harry Potter canon characters growing up and growing old, but it's awesome to find out what the characters have done with their lives. For example, I loved the way that you gave us a little insight into Oliver's backstory in this chapter, and why he returned to Puddlemere. And Seamus is just awesome! Full stop.

I really love you characterization of each and every character. Pippa particularly stands out. I love the way you described her outfit as: 'She looked like the lovechild of a flamingo and a disco ball.' I am now intrigued to find out more about each character and what they bring to the story.

Aw, I love how Oliver still reflects on his time at Hogwarts and how he reckons his Quidditch team was the best! I just re-read the books and realized how much I loved Oliver in them and how much humour he brought to the story, which makes it even more fun reading this!

I loved the line: '“That one? No! Too happy-clappy for my liking. I mean, she married her first crush, the woman’s practically a walking romance novel." I actually chuckled a bit while reading it. There are a lot of Ginny haters out there. I personally really like her in the books, but it was a great line, nevertheless.

This chapter definitely was a little fillery, but there's nothing wrong with that. However, for future reference, just be sure to have a good balance between dialogue and descriptions, etc.

Very nice third chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you for re-reviewing :P

Yeah, Oliver is quite old in this! I sort of have the same problem as you! The epilogue was quite weird for me! I was a bit like 'hang on, your not supposed to have kids!' I'm glad you liked Oliver's backstory, as we will be finding out more as the whole thing progresses.

I know, I love Seamus too! And Pippa, oh that crazy child and her fashion choices. . .we will be finding out more about every character as they go on, but to be honest they are kind of developing their own personality as it goes on, so even I don't know how they'll turn out in the end!

I actually love Ginny, but Pippa seems to be like a very realistic girl, who might be silly and a immature, but has a very clear vision of the world, and so I added in that line :D

Thank you so much for such a nice review :D


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