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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Oh my goodness this was such a beautifully written one-shot! I was honestly captivated from the very first sentence and could not look away until I'd read the very last word. The way you wrote this one-shot was so hooking, emotionally gripping, dark and...gah! Just so beautiful! I've read quite a bit of your stuff now and loved every single chapter and story, but I'd almost be tempted to say I think this is your best piece.

I've always been a fan of Draco, but it's rare to find a Draco pairing which does not involve Hermione, so I was so glad to read this. I loved the way you made all his emotions feel so raw and they were all bubbling up at the surface and about to explode.

Your characterization of Draco was brilliant, and I got a really good sense of the type of person Catherine is, too. And the ending was perfect in a dark, haunting way. I think you incorporated the use of Avada Kedavra really well and the repetition of 'Come with me' really added to the mystery of the piece.

Overall I thought this was an excellent one-shot, and I'd love to read more writing like this.

Author's Response: Hey Courtney! Thanks for reading and reviewing this!

I am glad you liked this, and found it well written. I am thrilled that you were so captivated by this. I am so flattered by your review - all these lovely adjectives are making me smile =) And yes, I quite agree, I think this is my best piece too!

Oh, you must explore the archives more! I have seen a lot of non-Dramione pairings involving Draco! But I am glad you liked this, and found the emotions raw and real.

I am pleased that you liked Draco and Catherine's characterisation, and found the ending perfect and dark, as that was my aim.

Thank you so much for your lovely words and I look forward to how the challenge results turn out! Whether or not they're in my favour, I am grateful I got a chance to participate in your challenge, as I was able to explore a darker side of my writing.


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