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Review:patronus_charm says:
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I always rather enjoyed it when Phineas Black made an appearance in the stories, as I liked his cynical humour, and reluctance to help, as though he was a Black he seemed to be a nicer one of the family.

I think you captured his personality really well, which is a rather hard thing to do considering he's a painting, and I thought it was really cool and unique that you decided to write about him, as I've never come across a story about him before.

I really liked his cynical thoughts, as they were rather funny, as they were so cynical, and it was nice to compare his current life, to the one that he had at Hogwarts.

For some CC's, I felt that the paragraph size was odd, this may just be me going OCD, but I like uniform paragraph sizes, but these varies greatly in size. And another point on the paragraphs the gaps between them differed as well.

Sorry for me going OCD, it can't be helped! I thought it was a great one-shot though and I really loved the cynical humour!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I enjoyed Phineas' appearance in the books too, and so I decided to give him some more show time in my own story!

His personality was indeed very difficult to capture and I am not sure if I got it right enough, but I am pleased you found him well-written. I give the credit for the idea to MyMyMiss (or karni) =)

I wanted to show a parallel between his current 'life' as a painting and his before, so I am glad you liked that too.

Oh, thanks for pointing that out. My formatting seems to get messed up a lot on here, I'll try putting the paragraphs and spacing right.

Thanks again!


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