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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi Sam!

This chapter had a lot of really funny moments mixed in with the seriousness of the situation. Especially the idea of Al buying the test. I imagine he stuttered a lot and received very sympathetic looks from the cashier, haha.

I really like that you had Albus researching and freaking out. I'm sure anyone that's experienced the 'I'm late' thing can absolutely identify. Suddenly everything that's on google is the word of god, and ever single symptom matches how you feel :P.

Only in this case, it wasn't all in their minds. Which, you now, we all had a pretty good idea that it wouldn't be :P.

I also really loved that Lexi didn't want to take the test. Again, another thing that I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. If she just ignore it and waits for her cycle to go back to normal, it will be okay. Except that it wouldn't be, and thank goodness Al had the sense to find out for sure.

It felt like once they saw the positive result, they both sort of went numb. Like, they'd realized it was a possibility, at least Albus had, but they didn't really think it would be true. And now, there's no denying it...

This was a lovely chapter, m'dear! I think your doing an awesome job making things feel very genuine and realistic!


Author's Response: Hey, Jami!

Haha, knowing how I write Al, I think that is a pretty accurate description of how he would have got the test. :P

No, it definitely wasn't all in their minds. It as fun writing Al hoping it wasn't true when the readers knew it would be because it's a pregnancy story. I was like 'ha' the whole time. Only fair, since he started it. ;)

Thank you so much for leaving such a lovely review!


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