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Review:quitebyaccident says:
First review ever.

The entire plotline of them being kidnapped and the invention being repurposed kind of threw me off. I guess I wasn't expecting it, but I'm not against it.

Your writing is fantastic, really, some of the best I've read on HPFF, which I think is why you can pull off just about any plot you choose to write. I'm fairly addicted to this story... to be honest.

I love the main characters of your stories, they're always so quirky, but not without flaws keeping them down-to-earth; however, what I admire most about your stories is... the main character always has something unique that they're good at/focused on - oh, I realize it's a huge part of the plot and not something you threw in for giggles, but I just have to say that it's so refreshing to read about a girl who has another focus besides whichever character they want to be with.


Keep up the fantastic writing.

Author's Response: Aaah, I know it was the best planned storyline. There was one that fit better, but the ending just wasn't what I wanted. I've sort of come to accept it for what it is, though I always tinker with the idea of going back and repurposing a few chapters to make it lead up to it better.

Thank you very much! c: I do love the crazy plots (to me, they don't start sounding crazy until I start describing them other people and then I realize), so that's very good to hear. I love romance in stories, but it gets so tiring if it's all there is! A little mystery, adventure, social commentary goes a long way, and it's darned fun to write too c:

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