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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Harry was just... Deadly and dangerous in this, wasn't he? Not himself, but in a way so natural to see. After everything he's been through, everyone he's lost, I think I'd have been more surprised if he hadn't snuck off to find them and do what he did. And what he did to Nott, what he said kinda put chills down my back. It's odd for me to say this, but your Nott really got what was coming to him.

I said it would be Draco, it could only have been Draco who followed Harry in my head, given everything he's done so far to help get Octavia back. But to see the four working together to bring her back, that is strange to see. But that's family... I love that their common goal in saving Octavia brings them together.

Amazing, if a little scary, chapter. I'm kind of afraid of how Harry will pull through this.


Author's Response: Yep, my Nott is a very different character from yours. He definitely earned his one-way trip to the permanent care ward at St. Mungo's. Harry was being Harry, same as always. This time, however, there was somebody else who could see what was coming.

Draco brings a definitely practicality to things, doesn't he? In a lot of ways, he's better able to see things for what they are than Ron or Hermione because he's not burdened by their optimism.

This was definitely one of my favorite chapters, having Harry dance on the edge of darkness. You're almost to the big finale!

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