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Review:limwen says:
THEY KISSED! AW!!! I LOVE IT! ADORABLENESS ALL AROUND! BUT I'M SURE SOMEONE HAS TO HAVE SEEN THEM AND TAKEN A PICTURE, HER MOTHER IS GOING TO FREAK OUT IF SHE FINDS OUT. I MEAN. WOWZER! AND I LOVE ALBUS, BUT THAT MIGHT JUST BE BECAUSE I'M A SUCKER FOR GREEN EYES... Jeepers creepers this is an awesome story, I also love Molly and Griffins relationship! It's adorable how much she likes him, even if she isn't aware that she likes him... Oh, and just a suggestion, the next chapter would be really cool if it was in James' POV. It'll be awesome without it, but I just thought I would share that..(:

Awesome Chapter, update soon please!!!

Lots of love,

Author's Response: Your theory is actually very interesting. Next chapter's in the queue, so you'll see if you're right very soon :)

I'm glad you like Al though! I actually wasn't sure if I should include him at all in the story at first, but now I'm happy I did.

Molly and Gryffin are my OTP. Like I want to be a part of their relationship. It's sad.

The next chapter will not be in James point of view, sadly. It's a really big pet peeve of mine to write things in the guy's POV when the whole rest of the story was written in someone elses. I dunno I just feel like the flow doesn't go well. It also spoils things, because as a reader I want you to be guessing about how James actually feels, and if you see it in his point of view you'll already know.

Wow, sorry I rambled. Thank you SO much for your review and I'm so glad you like the story!


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