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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Tag!

I really love this pairing, even though I've never written one myself, so it was nice to see your take on it, as I've read quite a few Teddy/Victoire/Dom triangles...and loved them all, FYI.

I actually liked the fast pace at which your plot moved along and the raw emotions and feelings you managed to bring out in a short space of time. I think your best characterization was of Teddy-he felt very real to read about, which I always love in a story, so nice job!

There were a few strange grammar and spelling errors scattered throughout the chapter, but I couldn't find anything too distracting.

Nice job!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hey Courtney!
yay! glad you like this pairing! I hav never really read of written about them so I was very apprehensive when i did this haah.

oh thank god i got Teddy right. I have literally read ZERO ff's about Teddy/Victorie. They are side characters sure but never an actual one about them so I had no idea whats cliche and whats not :P

I did read through and tried to fix the ones I caught!

Thanks!


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