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Review:aquabluez17 says:
Wow I really liked this! The fashion you used was amazing. Locran really seems like a harsh character :P I wonder how he will play out to be. Maybe he'll actually be a somewhat okay boss :P

I enjoyed Darcy as a character and Dom though she seemed a bit too air headed for a Ravenclaw and if you hadn't mentioned it I would have thought she was in another house. Maybe you could look at that?

Great start!

Author's Response: Hi there!

I'm glad you liked the fashion theme here and the introduction of Lorcan. He doesn't play a huge role in the story, but he seems to get left out of next-gen a lot, so I wanted to give him somewhat of an appearance here. He's a little tough right now, but he'll get better :)

It's great that the characterization worked well for you for the most part. I pictured Dom as a Ravenclaw because she's witty and resourceful in terms of finding the cover girls. I try not to force my characters into the mold of fitting every House characteristic to a T, because JKR didn't really do that either, you know? I'd have loved to hear what house you feel like Dominique would fit better in, though.

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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