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Review:DancingMooncalf says:
It's a little confusing with the present and the past switching all the time but I get the tension you tried to create. It's well written and really pin-points the feeling of loss and love at such a tumuldous moment... if you get my drift.

I'm a big Ron/Hermione fan and shower everything related to them, that is canon, with praise but you're piece really get's the subtlety of their relation.

I think you get what i'm saying... I like it, a lot!

Author's Response: yes, the tension was important and I thought I'd experiment with tenses ^_^ thank you for reading and reviewing!

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