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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for review tag!

Ah I quite enjoyed this. I do enjoy some James/Lily banter so this was a fun read. I loved how you wrote the Quidditch match, it was quite a well-written scene since I have seen authors write Quidditch scenes awfully xP

Anyway, I enjoyed your characterisation of James and Lily, and the interaction they had. I loved how you included the little detail of the marauders sending James the map and the cloak to go to the party xD The ending was really sweet too, and it was cute how James was hopeful.

I really liked reading this a lot, so good work!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. I noticed that you reviewed "Come with me" for review tag. I actually requested a review for that in your review thread a while ago, so you can feel free to ignore my request now, lol xP

Author's Response: Hello! Sorry for the delay in replying.

Whoops sorry - I had just checked my review thread before going on the tag too as I didn't have anything in there - you must have posted while I was reading!

I'm glad the Quidditch was okay! It was scary to write trust me! The second scene flowed a lot easier so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

Lauren


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