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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello! Here from the review tag!

Wow, what a powerful story. It's short but so full of imagery and feeling that it really gets to you.

You've portrayed Malfoy so well in this. His obvious love for Catherine is so sweet and you can see they care for each other deeply. The memory of them playing on the swing is lovely and really works well in the story. It's so awful that she was killed in front of him, by protecting him. You described the scene so well though.

The POV is amazing in this and works well, giving it kind of a detached feeling which is what Draco is feeling after losing Catherine.

The ending really gets to you though, you wrote it so beautifully. I could hear a girl whispering 'come with me' and could see Malfoy closing his eyes as he put his wand to his temple. It was honestly written so well it was just like watching a movie for me.

Well done on a fantastic piece of writing! You deserve to do well in both challenges!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

I am glad that you found this powerful, and liked the imagery, and the feeling.

I was a little worried about Draco's portrayal but its great to know that you liked it. I am pleased to hear that you liked the depiction of the whole Catherine taking the curse scene.

This is the first time I attempted such a writing style so I am glad that you found the POV to work well and it gave the detached feeling that I was aiming for.

The ending was the most challenging part for me to write so I am pleased that it got through to you.

Thank you so much for your lovely review!


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