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Review:adluvshp says:
Hi Summer! Popping by again to spread some love with random reviewing =)

Ah this was such a nicely written story. I loved that you captured Tonks' last moments and then how she "went to the other side" or whatever. That was pretty cool. I loved the love she had for Remus, it shone through so well. I'd have to liked to see more worry and love for Teddy too though, and sorrow for him being orphaned, since she is a mother and she would have equally longed for Teddy as she did for Remus. But I guess the focus of this was on Tonks/Remus so it was okay.

It made for a short but sweet read, and the ending put a smile. Its always good to think that the people we love re-unite with us even after death.

One tiny error I noticed, it should be "Till" and not "Til" like you have written. Or it should be "Until."

Otherwise, good work! 9/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi aditi! Thank you for randomly reviewing!

I love Tonks and Remus. I genuinely can't believe they died. I still can't believe JK Rowling did that to us. The love that she had for Remus will still shine through.

I do love to end on a happy ending.

Thank you for helping with my spelling!


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