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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello again :)

I very much enjoyed this chapter - it was action packed and gave us plenty to think about!

What a week for Brienne! Befriending the twins must be exhausting but at least it would be full of laughs. The way they dealt with Brienne in this chapter though was so funny. I loved the line about them treating her like a ticking bomb, it seemed very in character for the twins! George in particular was funny when he was attempting to comfort her in the owlery - he seems really taken with her.

So poor Brienne! You've finally told us her mum was killed but nothing else. You're doing an amazing job at keeping the suspense going through the story! You constantly have me wanting to read more, so well done for that.

The one thing I would say about the chapter is that it seemed to end a bit abruptly. I wasn't expecting it to end there.

Looking forward to reading more soon!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for coming back!

I'm glad you liked this chapter and that you're liking the characterisations and everything. I'll work on the ending, thanks for letting me know :)

Thanks again!


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