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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ohh Draco was a nasty little piece of work in this chapter, wasn't he?!

So now you have me all curious. Who really broke the vase, or was it him and he's just lying? Why did he even want Hermione suspicious of him by making the comment about not telling her why he was walking around, at least not yet.

I love all the questions you've set up! It's exactly what a reader needs to have them clicking to the next immediatly (which I would be doing if I didn't have to go wash laundry. Ugh).

Anyway, you ended this on such a perfect note. Let me back up, now...

The Theo Hermione time was really pleasant. I think that they're both going to find a comfortable balance around each other. I really like that you made him nice, but not weirdly sweet. And that you had him ask her why she was so full of herself all the time. I giggle snorted at that one.

I'm really excited to see what sort of friendship develops between them. Theo seems laid back, and I think that's the perfect counterpart to Hermione.

And you again have me guessing... if he's not best friends with Draco, then that's obviously not going to be what gets Hermione and Draco together .. hmm.. you're a sneaky lady, m'dear ;).

This was a really great chapter, Emily! I'll see you soon for the next ♥

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Draco is quite sneaky, isn't he? And annoying, too. :] But things will change eventually (obviously). I'm really glad you think the questions that are raised will make people interested in the story. That's exactly what I want! And I'm glad you like Theo. :] If you ever visit my Meet the Author page, you'll see my explanation of how I decided on Theo's character. He's my anti-Draco. :] Though, there are spoilers there, so maybe you wouldn't want to read it yet...Anyhow! Thank you so much for reviewing again! I'm so happy you like the story. :D

--Emily

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