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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for slytherin review tag!

Wow, this was definitely a very fast-paced yet touching story. I do love this pairing, as you know I am sure, so I enjoyed reading this.

I liked how you characterised Dominique, it was good to see her so strong. It almost felt like she was taking revenge on Teddy for marrying Victoire.

Feelings of jealousy, betrayal, and loss are always
hard to portray so I appreciate your effort on doing it. Over all, your writing was good. The plot was interesting and I liked the characterisations. The scenarios created were written well too. I'd just say to work on the grammar/spelling/punctuation though, as that is not very neat in the story and kind of disrupts the flow.

But apart from that, good work. 8/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey AD!

glad you liked this=) Your OS were the only things I have ever read about Teddy/Victorie as a pairing actually lol.

I did go bk and proofread so hopefully caught enough of the grammar problems lol

thank you for reviewing =)


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