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Review:MissMdsty says:
One thing I did not realize when reading the first chapter was that if this story is AU, everybody is up for grabs. And that means Neville and that means literally any other Weasley. Nobody is safe.

This chapter was so filled with emotion. My heart sank when they went outside and Voldemort had brought Harry back. It was such an incredibly horrible scene and I guess it must've been terrible to write. No matter who you ship or what your favorite character is, we are all here because we love Harry and we loved him first, before any of the other major characters came along.

I really liked your portrail of Bill in this. We see him really stepping up and being the oldest brother. I can understand his reasoning why he wouldn't let Ron go back. Ron was his family, his flesh and blood, they had already lost one other brother and all that mattered was getting him to safety. Even if, like we saw, his brother and his sister-in-law had to literally drag him there.

I'm so very scared for Hermione right now. I have no idea what might happen to her and the horror of this new world is reall starting to sink in. You've created this tense atmosphere from your writting and you descriptions and I love that!

Author's Response: Oh, yes -- everyone is definitely up for grabs. :( And like I said earlier, I always anticipate death in books, and I think that sort of came out in this chapter. I wanted a challenge, though, and I didn't want to result to Neville killing Voldemort just because he fit the prophecy alongside Harry.

This whole chapter was terrible to write... and yet, in a sort of twisted way, it was one of my absolute favorites. My favorite things to write are always the big, dramatic scenes that are charged with emotion and drama and tension and all that. Writing Harry as being dead was eerie, but I included the image several times because it was really powerful in my mind.

Not enough people include Bill! I love that you seem to have picked up everything I wanted to include about him, too -- that big-brother attitude, the brother who has to take care of all the others. He WAS scared and selfish enough to want his family safe above all others, and that is a very human thing, I think.

Obviously you've finished the story and know what happens, but I'm so glad the horror of this alternate universe hit you; that's exactly what I was going for. I honestly cannot thank you enough for leaving all these reviews for me, too. You have no idea how much it means to me!! ♥


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