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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again! I'm here for your prize review! After this one I'll have reviewed everything on your page (AWW YEAH) so I'll wait for you to upload something. :D

Okay, I'll start the review now. :p

Alright. What.

What is this beautiful piece of work?

Why is it so amazing?

Why, caoty, why?

Why can you write so perfectly and not be able to share it around? Silly caoty, sharing is caring!

As soon as I saw the title, I was like, "I have to leave this one to last. It sounds really thrilling and unique."


I'm very, very, VERY confused about Part II but it's just written so perfectly I've put my confusion aside and just relished in the beauty of the words.

I love Part V, though. It's just AH-MAY-ZING! *diamond sparkle*

I loved, loved, LOVED this line:

Below, arms and legs lie in suspended animation, like grotesque puppets. They are what you will become.

Just, oh my gosh. How did you come up with that bit of perfection?

And I love the last line as well, it just reflects that Regulus was just as brave as Sirius and it's just so dguvudgvdkv.

By golly. I've read this like four times now because it's just so thrilling and amazing. You really have a knack for this type of writing!

So, if you couldn't tell, I LOVED this one-shot! I absolutely adored it!

One hundred per cent 10/10! :D

Review number 3/10.

Author's Response: Hello~! I guess I'll have to get around to writing, then, eh?

And I'm so sorry for this over-a-month late review response. I'm crap at stuff like this.

Part II was just sort of written for fun, honestly. It basically has nothing to do with the rest of the story at all, but I like it, so I put it in there. XD

Anyway - you are wonderful, I'm really glad you like it, and thank you so much for your challenge and your prizes! :D

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